David,
Thank you! Your grasp of English is far better than mine of French!
As (if) time permits, I will attempt to put that in the common American English vernacular, but I must say that, for the most part, you did a yeoman job of it!
There is very little to change, and then, only in the use of particular words unique to American English, and as pertains to case and tense, which varies between the Latinic and Germanic languages.
Lloyd